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In this personal narrative, Jasmin describes a ride that she went on at the State Fair.

I was directed to a giant basket. The basket turns and makes you want to throw up, so I decided to call it the Giant Circle of Vomit. My dad and I got in the giant basket. It started to turn around. I screamed so hard I began to cry. I told my dad I wanted to get off. He said, "It's only 3 minutes long." I got very scared and almost slipped off. Then my dad said, "Hold on tight!" The basket went down and we finally got off the ride. I was glad to be back to earth! * __Hippotherapy,__ by Patrick Last summer I went to hippotherapy and rode a horse named Echo. Echo was a tall, brown horse. I was afraid to get on him and I don't know why! I rode Echo out of the barn and saw some goofy trees with eyes that the owners put on them. They frightened me! The trees had sticks in them which I threw rings on. I did well! After the ring toss, I threw bean bags in a container. I did snazzy! After the bean bag toss, I said goodbye to Echo. I cried when I said goodbye. I went to hippotherapy all summer long. **

__My Uncle's Race__, by Alexis My uncle Jason came speeding out. The guy said, "GO-O-O-O-O-O!!!!" Jason was in second place until the guy in front of him spun out. My family ran down the stairs and Jason's car was smashed into the wall. My mom was yelling, "Are you okay?" Jason didn't reply. She yelled again, and he still did not reply. A helper went in and told him that he could get out of his car. Hurray! He was okay! Jason's kids and wife and Aunt Becky were all crying with relief. Everybody was saying, "Excellent!" He is okay, but his care is damaged. At least we can fix it before next year!